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Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Poems I wrote for English, opinions?

I input some of J.R.R. Tolkein's style, a tad of Stephenie Meyer's, and some of my own unique style. I used as much imagery as possible.

A Harpist Dream
If all my hopes and dreams came true,
What a harpist I would be!
I see the vision clear as river blue.
I’m reaching out to take my degree:
“Master of Music: Harp” it says.
I feel so happy and so free.
Then the scene changes.
I find myself in my studio,
Teaching precious Guinevere, my beautiful little girl.
I help her put her little hands upon the harp,
Place her fingers on the strings,
And play a little tune.
The scene changes again.
I sit upon the stage in all my glory,
A million starlights all among me.
I wear the midnight sky upon my dress,
My hair is long and curled;
The sparkle of passion is in my eyes.
I pull the harp back, place my fingers on the strings,
And from them gently flows:
A nightingale of melody.
Soon I’m lost among the music,
Flying with the notes and song.

A Wedding Dream
If all my hopes and dreams came true,
A beautiful bride would I be!
I see the vision clear as crystal sea.
I stand upon the altar, dressed up all in white:
A vision of beauty am I.
As I take my wedding vows,
I say“ I do” and the tears begin to fall.
I’m not proclaiming sadness, but unrestraining joy.
To be here with my one true love
And all the others whom I love.
I smile through my clear glass drops,
And throw my bright bouquet into the crowd
To a lucky woman’s hands.

A Children Dream
If all my hopes and dreams came true,
A little boy and girl I’d have.
I see the vision clear as glassy pool.
I’m rocking little Guinevere
And little Edward, too.
I put them in their beds,
We all say prayers and say goodnight.
I sing to them till their little eyes are shut with sleep.
My husband takes me by the hand as the children fall asleep.
We smile at them and walk out of the room;
Leaving our children to sleep.






Answer :
...Wow, is all I can say. I could never write anything as beautiful as that. ;)

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Is this really a poem, or is it prose?

With holiday read in hand I lie
in a neglected sun-baked garden,
dotted with drooping daises
and dandelion clocks.

As a constant reminder that this is Greece
nearby stand gnarled silver-green olive trees
the epitome of history and peace.

Behind me is a crumbling white-washed wall.
Cascades of white roses tumble like
a waterfall down its face filling the air
with a rare and delicate perfume.

In the distance comes an insistent
coo of a dove
from the fir-clad hills above.
Its call creating a soothing counter-melody
to the noisy sparrows,
gossiping and fighting in the fruit-free trees.

So clear in the sky, as if just created,
I see Mount Olympus, home of the gods
in the majestic white clustering clouds,
painted on a canvas of an unreal blue.
Its hue reflecting the turquoise serenity
of the timeless Aegean Sea.

Across my vision swifts persistently swoop,
their flight an erratic dart and dive,
like paper aeroplanes tossed by a carefree child.

The sun is high in the late afternoon,
toasting my pale English skin,
presenting me with scattered freckles
and a drowsy happiness within.

My book is too heavy for my hand
My head droops in the heat
My eyes close
My breathing slows
I'm lost in blissful sleep.






Answer :
Anything can be a poem, even straight out poetry. It's up to the poet to decide if it's a poem. But, if you call something a poem and it's not a very good poem, then you will be lambasted by the poetry community. This is the same thing with prose, though. A very good poem can be bashed because you called it prose. This, however, is clearly a poem as it has no narrative structure. But a narrative poem can be called "prose" just as easily as prose poetry can be called a "poem". Naomi Shihab Nye is a very good prose poet, if you're interested in finding out more about that. And narrative poetry is, well, all over the place, from Beowulf to The Odyssey to Shakespeare and, in modern day, Yehuda Amichai and Seamus Heaney are great narrative poets.
Long story short, you've got a very nice little poem there.

Thank you for your encouragement. I have had a quick look for N S Nye - but, got side-tracked! Noted her name will try again another time.
Holly - read your poem - (very impressed I was with your maturity)






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Very descriptive. It's obvious from the poem that you are in unfamiliar territory. Even the meter is different from your usual poetry, as if you were not really sure how to describe all these unfamiliar sights (and sites). In the end, the tension seems to get t






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Welcome back from holiday. At least you brought this nice gem to share. From dandelion clocks to the swifts you have painted the scenery well. A puzzling question remains though: was it a book of poetry in your lap or some latest gothic romance? lol Compliments to you on this.






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Last year I went to Greece for my holiday, and I fell in love. Thanks for reminding me about what a magical place it is with this--and here is the answer to your question--fine POEM.






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Greece sounds beautiful, one of the places on my travel wish list! The poem has great imagery, I enjoyed reading it and being there for a little while through your poem.






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It's beautiful! I love it, great imagery!
I would say a poem, it's hard to tell sometimes! I write poems that are very long, they could be short stories!
(Here is one of my shorter ones!...http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/for-i-am-…
But yeah, i think it's too image-filled to be prose.
Great work though, i can just imagine it!
XD!

Anyway anything can be poetry; from one liners and haiku, to 3 pages! Poetry can really be anything, some things are expected, but really you can write a story and call it a poem!
Yours is definately a poem!

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

I wonder if?

all you people who answerd my question about where you were and what you could see out your window realize how very nice it was for me to read all your answers and i felt like i knew all of you. i could see all the things you saw and felt what the weather was doing as well....thank you so much for taking the time to look out your windows and sending that vision across all the seas and miles to me here in sausalito california....as i write this it is 7.45 on tuesday evening and the sun has just set behind the hill....my boat is rocking a little and the seagulls are going off to roost!....thankyou all so much again!!






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aw, thats so sweet! i imagine you sitting you there looking out at sea, its lovely... if you want a peek out my window i have the most beautiful park in the world (to me) outside and a view overlooking my cherry, and plum tree and herb garden and all the springy flowers are coming up!
didnt go outside today but i think its chilly! (probably why i didnt!)

thanks J for your description too, that sounds lovely too...






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very jelous!
its 4am in London, I cant sleep and though I have a nice view of a black Canary Wharf, the London Eye and loads of trees outside, it doesnt help that I am the only one seeing it!

Hope you sleep well.






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sitting here in work in london looking at a glass office buliding
and its raining.want to swap places?have a good night

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