Opinions Please For My Lyrics?

I was a little bored, it’s not complete since I would probably add a chorus or cross segment

Forget the past dedicated to MS

I came through the battle of love from the past,
Through passages of time captured forever
Let me ride on the clouds so fast
I want to hold you forever
Free the emotions of a heart
Seas and oceans apart
Let me forget the past

Across the deep blue seas visions of desire
Healed through endeavour
Dreams of you take me higher
I want to hold you forever
Brace the lost soul and broken heart
Chase the last goal and awoken new start
Let me forget the past

Over minarets and steeples across the desert sand
Close my eyes and think of you wherever
Spiritually to reach out my hand
I want to hold you forever
Find me inside your heart
Remind me we will never be apart
Let me forget the past






Answer :
I really love the words.. How beautiful ... Very touching.. To forget the past and move on to a new love, that will carry you through the pain. Till there is pain no more.

Thank you so much for all the kind replies. I didn’t think it was a sad song, but we shall see I will get someone to sing this to music also. I know I can write much better with more time. Thanks for all the kind words.






Answer :
Only a soul that has suffered a broken a heart can write such sad lyrics because they know the pain of losing a beautiful illusion, because love goes beyond time, distance and death.






Answer :
I like it! I really do!
You seam to be a very sensitive young man.
Watch it!






Answer :
I LOVE IT
VERY SWEET
I KNO HOW U FEEL
TRUST ME
I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR IT WITH A BEAT